tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555664269648250473.post177150115169411193..comments2023-12-07T02:42:50.522-06:00Comments on Grit in the Gears: Poem. Today's selection.soubriquethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01151288534629885195noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555664269648250473.post-20582079108545463622012-12-02T17:13:19.847-06:002012-12-02T17:13:19.847-06:00When I was in fifth grade I got a handwritten vale...When I was in fifth grade I got a handwritten valentine from a little red-headed girl (no connection intended) that ended with "I Love You." Her name was Susan Stewart and I haven't thought of her in years until now. Thanks a lot. So this is how she ended up - writing unfathomable poetry. Probably an old maid, spoiled for life, having flown too close to the flame in her innocent youth.<br /><br />I think she was the same girl who beat me up in fourth grade.Relax Maxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01051381168322495999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555664269648250473.post-74583149316542830812012-11-30T14:40:35.739-06:002012-11-30T14:40:35.739-06:00I like the imagery.
As for atheism, well, her god ...I like the imagery.<br />As for atheism, well, her god is your god if there is only one god.<br />Myself?<br />I'm not convinced the number goes as high as one.<br /><br />The image? Yes, french bees dining on m&m candies, and bringing the colour home.<br />I liked the line 'how he hides in the hexagons of the bees', and wanted a bee-hexagon image.<br />I like her lines.soubriquethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01151288534629885195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555664269648250473.post-41870644676653539442012-11-29T22:25:00.013-06:002012-11-29T22:25:00.013-06:00I thought I had seen that image before ......
ht...I thought I had seen that image before ...... <br /><br />http://gritinthegears.blogspot.com/2012/10/a-b-in-art.html<br /><br />As for gods, no comment.<br /><br />xxxred dirt girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12939283533222061484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555664269648250473.post-23285285728465703332012-11-29T15:51:01.952-06:002012-11-29T15:51:01.952-06:00That made me an atheist to her god.That made me an atheist to her god.Adullamitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15537659871829290071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7555664269648250473.post-52480986949943962172012-11-29T15:35:37.202-06:002012-11-29T15:35:37.202-06:00So very descriptive. I'd love to sit with my ...So very descriptive. I'd love to sit with my eyes closed listening to a narration of it.<br /><br />Thanks...Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15835982875620956300noreply@blogger.com